Thursday, March 11, 2010

Everyday

a haiku…

exit my warm bed
teach kids all day home workout
journal TV sleep

Whew! That was tough. I have much too much to say to use the haiku format very often. Free verse is more my style. Wow, my “regular” day is even less exciting in poetry. What’s your favorite part of your regular day.

mamakat

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17 comments:

  1. Maureen@IslandRoarMarch 11, 2010 at 6:04 AM

    I love how much you got in those 3 little lines.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 11, 2010 at 6:11 AM

    I don't really know what haiku is, nor do I think I care at my age,
    but you communicated very well. I think it sounds exciting.
    More so than mine.

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  3. No Longer 25March 11, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    Yay for haiku, it can be difficult to get everything in just a couple of lines. I think you did a great job.
    Jade

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  4. JenniferMarch 11, 2010 at 6:55 AM

    Yeah, an "ordinary" day is really just kinda... well, ordinary. LOL

    Thanks for stopping by.

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  5. MamaOtwins+1March 11, 2010 at 6:57 AM

    Found you through writer's workshop!

    So much said in three little lines - such is life ;)

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  6. Windthicket FablesMarch 11, 2010 at 8:25 AM

    Love the haiku- I picked the same prompt! Stopping from Mamakats.

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  7. Stu PidassoMarch 11, 2010 at 8:51 AM

    I think you hit the right high points there. Teach kids, workout, journal, and sleep are all good things to do in a day.

    Few words make for powerful message.

    Thanks for stopping by and leaving some comment love!

    Cheers.

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  8. mariasangelMarch 11, 2010 at 1:04 PM

    congrats on a successful haiku! my favorite part of the day is right before i get out of bed when i can enjoy the last minutes of a snuggle and the kitty comes to say good morning :) directly followed by my least favorite part of the day--having to get out of bed :p

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  9. KellyMarch 11, 2010 at 7:33 PM

    My favorite? I was going to say taking a hot shower, but after reading mariasangel's response, I would have to agree. Snuggling with the kitten before getting up in the morning. She, I mean he!, is so sweet.

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  10. Gamma SharonMarch 11, 2010 at 9:38 PM

    Thanks so much for coming and spreading the comment love on my blog.
    I think your haiku said it all... well done!

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  11. UnknownMarch 11, 2010 at 10:43 PM

    My morning coffee in my jammies is the best part of my day.

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  12. sewa mobilMarch 11, 2010 at 10:57 PM

    wow great post. I tend to only read the blogs that I find interesting .
    Keep posting stuff like this i really like it.

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  13. Karen & Gerard ZemekMarch 13, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    I'd have to say the favorite part of my regular day is getting home from work and seeing my husband and dog meet me at the bus stop and then going home and having my cats greet me.

    Visiting from Mama Kat's Writer's Workshop.

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  14. Karen & Gerard ZemekMarch 13, 2010 at 4:51 PM

    Haiku's are hard!

    (Sorry, forgot to put in my URL on my above comment)

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  15. UnknownMarch 13, 2010 at 8:38 PM

    This was really good Pumpkin. You never cease to amaze me : )

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  16. Claudya MartinezMarch 13, 2010 at 8:49 PM

    Warm bed is probably my favorite part of any day.

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  17. sewa mobil di surabayaJuly 4, 2010 at 9:06 PM

    I usually love gardening, I thought it was a fun activity, because with gardening then we will learn to appreciate and care for nature, so we also will appreciate and care for ourselves and our families
    regards my friend, sister and brother

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