Thursday, March 11, 2010

Everyday

a haiku…

exit my warm bed
teach kids all day home workout
journal TV sleep

Whew! That was tough. I have much too much to say to use the haiku format very often. Free verse is more my style. Wow, my “regular” day is even less exciting in poetry. What’s your favorite part of your regular day.

mamakat

17 comments:

  1. I love how much you got in those 3 little lines.

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  2. I don't really know what haiku is, nor do I think I care at my age,
    but you communicated very well. I think it sounds exciting.
    More so than mine.

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  3. Yay for haiku, it can be difficult to get everything in just a couple of lines. I think you did a great job.
    Jade

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  4. Yeah, an "ordinary" day is really just kinda... well, ordinary. LOL

    Thanks for stopping by.

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  5. Found you through writer's workshop!

    So much said in three little lines - such is life ;)

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  6. Love the haiku- I picked the same prompt! Stopping from Mamakats.

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  7. I think you hit the right high points there. Teach kids, workout, journal, and sleep are all good things to do in a day.

    Few words make for powerful message.

    Thanks for stopping by and leaving some comment love!

    Cheers.

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  8. congrats on a successful haiku! my favorite part of the day is right before i get out of bed when i can enjoy the last minutes of a snuggle and the kitty comes to say good morning :) directly followed by my least favorite part of the day--having to get out of bed :p

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  9. My favorite? I was going to say taking a hot shower, but after reading mariasangel's response, I would have to agree. Snuggling with the kitten before getting up in the morning. She, I mean he!, is so sweet.

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  10. Thanks so much for coming and spreading the comment love on my blog.
    I think your haiku said it all... well done!

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  11. My morning coffee in my jammies is the best part of my day.

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  12. wow great post. I tend to only read the blogs that I find interesting .
    Keep posting stuff like this i really like it.

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  13. Karen & Gerard ZemekMarch 13, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    I'd have to say the favorite part of my regular day is getting home from work and seeing my husband and dog meet me at the bus stop and then going home and having my cats greet me.

    Visiting from Mama Kat's Writer's Workshop.

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  14. Haiku's are hard!

    (Sorry, forgot to put in my URL on my above comment)

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  15. This was really good Pumpkin. You never cease to amaze me : )

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  16. Warm bed is probably my favorite part of any day.

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  17. I usually love gardening, I thought it was a fun activity, because with gardening then we will learn to appreciate and care for nature, so we also will appreciate and care for ourselves and our families
    regards my friend, sister and brother

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